Final Products (plus a small start on Evaluation)

Here is my video commentary, you can find a screenshot summary of this video below

I have made a start on evaluation comparing my products with the texts that inspired them

I will compare them with other texts later in the evaluation stage

Final Cover

this is my final cover (left) along with the Kerrang cover (right) that I used for inspiration

Changes:

• Stamp-like sale line; like Kerrangs
• added Bar code; similar placement to Kerrangs
• Right aligned text for right hand side sale lines; like Kerrangs left aligned sell lines
• General tidy up (e.g. making the sale lined darker so they are readable)



This is my contents page (top) along with the Kerrang contents (bottom) I used for inspiration

Changes:

• Added Classmate to fit convention of multiple people on a contents, he has a similar serious look to Kyle.
• changed page listings to fit Classmate
• changed 'contents issue 1' to white.

this is my heavily altered double page spread (top) with the NME double page spread ( Bottom) that I used

for layout inspiration

Changes:

• two black boxes on the right page next to each other; like the white and black areas on NMEs right page
• Black box in the corner; like the blue box in the same position in NME
• Pictures indented into text; like NME does, but my images have been placed differently for originality.
• similar heading and picture placement